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dearest soul
what will it take to get you to live?
how many steps can I take to make you exhale before
you just run out of water?
spill your atoms, cry your anatomy loose,
let the hoarse chants and helpless rivers flow
run unchecked and swift.
I have heard tales told, primal and coarse,
that you would never have believed
mine ears would ever hear;
and yet, I know the pain
and I hear the suffer,
and I offer you my canoe paddles
to dig that much further upstream.
but,
will you?
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I actually am not too sure I get this...
At first i thought i did.. like we all have our own places to try and fight to get out but i am not too sure.
Curiosity
" spill your atoms, cry your anatomy loose," what does this mean?
and what about the canoe paddles?
x.x. sorry.. maybe I am just derping from my tiredness but i rlly want to know the meaning to this poem c;.
~lykos
At first i thought i did.. like we all have our own places to try and fight to get out but i am not too sure.
Curiosity
" spill your atoms, cry your anatomy loose," what does this mean?
and what about the canoe paddles?
x.x. sorry.. maybe I am just derping from my tiredness but i rlly want to know the meaning to this poem c;.
~lykos